At last you've had the courage to ditch those nasty black outlines around your figures!....and look how much better this is for it!...definately your best yet.

The perspective on the corrdor leading into the painting is way off...you need to find your horizon line and build all perpsective from that at the drawing stage to avoid these lind of errors.
You also need to start studying hard on your anatomy...use references..it;s the only way you can begin to understand what a nose really looks like or how features appear when the head is tilted like this.

There is much wrong with this...but it's such an improvement on your earlier work that I hope people go easy on it.

I like it good work

 Kaduflyer, I'm not sure about the corridor - to me it looks like it's one of those paths in subway stations that simply go up at a smooth slant. So it may not be as wrong as it seems.

I do agree about anatomy, particularly check the face - eyes, nose. The expression would be even more realistic if the face weren't falling apart a little.

But other than that, keep going! You're definitely making improvement!

Dance Cat Dance.... 10+

I agree with Kaduflyer that your work looks so much better without the deep blacks (like I can talk!) But this picture has a message and you've put a lot of thought and detail into it.

I think that might indeed be a slope on the corridor behind. Good work!

Hi by all!
That that causes in you of doubt, it is underground transition and this path has no steps,
For simplification of walking to the old men and mums with carriages and small children.
I can all not so has understood, but as it seems, has answered your questions.
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